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The Door in the Wall

Story Continuation

Intermediate

20 minutes

CSSE

Independent

The Prompt

“Continue the following story: "I had walked past the wall a hundred times before. It ran along the edge of the park, covered in ivy and graffiti, unremarkable in every way. But today, something was different. Today, there was a door. A small, arched door, painted green, with a brass handle that gleamed as though it had just been polished." Write what happens next.”

Planning Hints

4 tips to help you plan your response

Maintain the mysterious, curious tone.

Should the character open the door? What's on the other side?

It doesn't have to be magical — it could be an unexpected garden, a workshop, a person.

Build tension before the door is opened. What does the character feel?

Starter Sentences

Suggested opening lines to get you started

“I stopped. My feet simply refused to keep walking.”

“Common sense said walk away. Curiosity said something else entirely.”

“The handle was warm. That was the strangest part.”

Key Techniques to Demonstrate

Techniques the examiner will be looking for in your response

Annotated Model Answer

A high-quality example response with techniques highlighted

I stopped. My feet simply refused to keep walking. The door shouldn't have been there. I knew this wall. I knew the pattern of its ivy, the spray-painted tag that read "JENKO" in wobbling purple letters, the section where the bricks were darker because the drainpipe leaked. There had never been a door. And yet here it was, as solid and certain as if it had been there for centuries. I looked around. The park was empty except for a man walking a greyhound in the distance. Nobody was watching. Nobody would see. The handle was warm. That was the strangest part. Brass shouldn't be warm on a grey October morning. I wrapped my fingers around it and turned. The mechanism clicked — a satisfying, well-oiled sound that suggested someone had been caring for this door, even if I had never noticed it. It opened inward. A breath of air escaped — warm, sweet, carrying the scent of something floral I couldn't identify. Beyond the doorway, narrow stone steps led downward, curving out of sight. The walls on either side were covered in tiles — deep blue, hand-painted with tiny white flowers — and a string of small, golden lights hung from hooks in the ceiling, casting a honeyed glow. I should have walked away. That's what sensible people do when they find impossible doors in familiar walls. But I have never been particularly sensible, and the lights were so inviting, and the stairs were right there, and my feet were already moving. I stepped through. The door closed behind me with a soft, final click. Somewhere below, I could hear music.

Hover or tap the highlighted phrases to see the technique and explanation

Techniques Used in This Answer

Personification (x2)

Simile

Short Sentences

Sensory Detail

Voice

Cliffhanger

Ready to Write?

Practice this prompt under timed conditions, just like the real exam. You have 20 minutes.

Planning Templates

Suitable for story continuation

Story Mountain

The classic 5-part narrative structure. Perfect for story writing prompts where you need a clear beginning, middle, and end.

5 steps|3-5 minutes

4-Paragraph Plan (CSSE Style)

A focused structure for shorter writing tasks (15-20 minutes). Ideal for CSSE where you only write 2 compulsory paragraphs, but this plan gives you 4 strong ones if time allows.

4 steps|2-3 minutes

Marking Focus Areas

imagination

atmosphere

organisation

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