4 tips to help you plan your response
Match the tone — reflective, slightly nervous, observational.
Keep the first-person voice consistent.
Something should happen on the train — a conversation, a discovery, a change in plan.
Use the moving scenery outside as a backdrop for internal thoughts.
Suggested opening lines to get you started
“The carriage was almost empty.”
“I unfolded my sandwich and stared at it without eating.”
“A woman in the seat opposite smiled at me over the top of her newspaper.”
Techniques the examiner will be looking for in your response
A high-quality example response with techniques highlighted
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Practice this prompt under timed conditions, just like the real exam. You have 20 minutes.
Suitable for story continuation
The classic 5-part narrative structure. Perfect for story writing prompts where you need a clear beginning, middle, and end.
A focused structure for shorter writing tasks (15-20 minutes). Ideal for CSSE where you only write 2 compulsory paragraphs, but this plan gives you 4 strong ones if time allows.
organisation
vocabulary
sentence variety
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