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The Train Journey

Story Continuation
Intermediate
20 minutes
CSSE
Independent
The Prompt
Continue the following story: "The train pulled away from the platform and I pressed my face to the window, watching the station shrink behind me. I was travelling alone for the first time. My ticket said London, but the journey felt like it was heading somewhere much further than that." Write what happens next.
Planning Hints

4 tips to help you plan your response


1

Match the tone — reflective, slightly nervous, observational.

2

Keep the first-person voice consistent.

3

Something should happen on the train — a conversation, a discovery, a change in plan.

4

Use the moving scenery outside as a backdrop for internal thoughts.

Starter Sentences

Suggested opening lines to get you started

The carriage was almost empty.

I unfolded my sandwich and stared at it without eating.

A woman in the seat opposite smiled at me over the top of her newspaper.

Key Techniques to Demonstrate

Techniques the examiner will be looking for in your response

Voice
Show Dont Tell
Sensory Detail
Dialogue
Annotated Model Answer

A high-quality example response with techniques highlighted

The carriage was almost empty. A businessman in a grey suit tapped at his laptop without looking up. A woman with silver hair and paint-stained fingers read a paperback, turning pages with the slow certainty of someone who had nowhere to be. The seat opposite me was empty, its table scattered with crumbs from a previous passenger's journey. I unfolded my sandwich and stared at it. Cheese and pickle — Mum's default. She had wrapped it in foil so tightly it looked like a small, shiny brick. The foil crinkled in my hands, and the sound felt enormous in the quiet carriage. Outside, the city had given way to fields. Green and brown squares stitched together like a patchwork quilt, interrupted by clusters of houses and the occasional church spire rising above the hedgerows. The sky was wide and pale, the kind of sky that makes you feel both small and free at the same time. I pulled the envelope from my bag. Gran's handwriting on the front — shaky now, but still unmistakably hers, each letter formed with the deliberate care of someone who had learned to write with an ink pen and never quite forgiven the world for inventing biros. "Open on the train," it said. So I did. Inside was a photograph — black and white, creased at the corners — of a girl about my age standing outside King's Cross station, a suitcase in one hand and a grin so wide it seemed to spill off the edges of the picture. On the back: "My first solo trip. 1962. Terrified. Best day of my life." I smiled. The cheese and pickle suddenly tasted better. The fields scrolled past, the train rocked gently, and somewhere ahead, London was waiting — not as a destination on a ticket, but as a beginning.

Hover or tap the highlighted phrases to see the technique and explanation

Techniques Used in This Answer
Show Dont Tell
Simile (x2)
Personification
Hyperbole
Contrast
Ready to Write?

Practice this prompt under timed conditions, just like the real exam. You have 20 minutes.

Planning Templates

Suitable for story continuation

Story Mountain

The classic 5-part narrative structure. Perfect for story writing prompts where you need a clear beginning, middle, and end.

5 steps|3-5 minutes
4-Paragraph Plan (CSSE Style)

A focused structure for shorter writing tasks (15-20 minutes). Ideal for CSSE where you only write 2 compulsory paragraphs, but this plan gives you 4 strong ones if time allows.

4 steps|2-3 minutes
Marking Focus Areas

organisation

vocabulary

sentence variety

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