Why It Matters
Metaphors are more powerful than similes because they don't just compare — they transform. They show the examiner you can think creatively about language.
Examples
“The classroom was a zoo after the teacher left.”
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“The city was noisy at night.”
“The city was a symphony of sirens and slamming doors.”
“Her eyes were bright.”
“Her eyes were lanterns, guiding me through the dark conversation.”
“Time passed slowly.”
“Time was treacle, thick and reluctant to move.”
The best metaphors feel natural, not forced. If your metaphor makes the reader think "that's clever but weird," it's probably too much. Aim for "that's exactly right."
Practice Exercises
Try these exercises to practise using metaphor in your own writing. Click "Show Suggestions" to see example answers.
1
Turn this literal description into a metaphor: "The path through the forest was very dark."
The path was a tunnel of shadow, swallowed by the trees.
The forest had drawn its curtains, and the path disappeared into the dark.
2
Write a metaphor to describe a crowded train.
The train was a sardine tin on wheels.
The carriage was a pressure cooker of coats and elbows.
3
Write a metaphor for anger.
Anger was a fire in my chest, burning hotter with every word.
The anger was a clenched fist inside me, tight and trembling.
Related Techniques
Simile
A comparison between two things using the words "like" or "as".
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Personification
Giving human qualities, feelings, or actions to something that is not human — an object, an animal, or an idea.
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Extended Metaphor
A metaphor that continues across several sentences or an entire paragraph, developing the comparison in depth.
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